10 years later and this is still one the gems of the internet!
Good stuff here! I have to say that your snare is sounding pretty fat, and I love it! The last part is pretty good as well, I think it's that high synth that makes it as it blends with the other sounds. When the melody rises and dips in perfect sync with the song, it just sounds wonderful. Awesome stuff! Is this being used in a video game? If not, what kind of game would you like it to be in?
Nope not in a game. For some reason my brain wraps music around gameish sounds
I love the look and feel of this. I'm not sure if the look is stylistically the way it is, but I feel as though certain parts of it could be tighten up a bit and the dynamic pushed, but that is just me. Good job!
thanks for the feedback, i tried to make it more dynamic but it proved difficult with all of the mechanical parts, guess i just have to practice more.
I'm honestly not impressed by this. I've seen from other work you've done that this is hardly your best. You should bank less on tits, ass, and pussy and really own your ability as an artists. Though if you do, own it. Your "Smokey's Paradies" makes this drawing look like a quick doodle, and that was over a year ago. My personal suggestion would be to post less sketches and more final pieces that highlight your skills to an extent that makes it impossible for someone to not love what you do. Try working more with pens & inks as well as that typically forces an artist to make sure what they've done to be the best they can do. I'm not hating on your work by any means, I just would like to see your best. I know you can do it!
Hey I'm very busy at the moment and i know those less good pics but i have more stuff I'm working at i will post some om my skechts gallery that I'm working on:P
i know it not hating and stuff and I'm glad u says this to me
Creative, interesting, clean line work, maybe a bit too much negative space but over all I like it. I could probably think a few people who would love this as a tattoo. If you end up doing any coloring to this piece, I would highly recommend you make sure it is as polished as possible. You wouldn't want it to look like you ended up saying to yourself "meh, maybe it's good enough".
Again, great job!
Fantastic critique, thank you. Tattoo work is an area I've been looking into, not sure if I understand it yet. It's similar yet very different from comics,thanks, again.
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